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Post by ~ab~ on Jul 31, 2005 16:47:22 GMT
post your stories
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Post by Dc on Aug 1, 2005 10:04:36 GMT
[glow=red,2,300] STORY TIME - D!c£[/glow] ;D
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Post by ~ab~ on Aug 1, 2005 13:50:26 GMT
[glow=red,2,300] STORY TIME - D!c£[/glow] ;D YO! itz ma homey dice! ;D wassup? can u join and not just b a gest?
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Post by dice on Aug 1, 2005 14:20:45 GMT
go
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Post by ~ab~ on Aug 1, 2005 14:26:46 GMT
one day charlie bucket went out for a strole by the wonka forest and saw a well.
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Post by dice on Aug 1, 2005 14:30:11 GMT
It started on that very day. That day when Katlyn had left her mobile at Carters house.
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Post by ~ab~ on Aug 1, 2005 14:33:28 GMT
Katlyn and Carter were never really that close.
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Post by dice on Aug 1, 2005 14:37:26 GMT
It was a sunny day, Carter went to Katlyns school - they never spoke but her mum stuck her foot in it and asked if Carter needed a lift, so he got in - unaware of what was about to happen...
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Post by ~ab~ on Aug 1, 2005 14:39:43 GMT
They arrived at Katlyn's house at 4pm sharp. Katlyn's mum invited Carter in for a while so he stayed for half an hour. After the first 15 mins....
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Post by dice on Aug 1, 2005 14:41:35 GMT
Carter and Katlyn got talking and asked if she wanted to go to his as no one was in. She agreed and off they went...
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Post by ~ab~ on Aug 1, 2005 14:43:21 GMT
Katlyn stopped at carters front gate gazing at the almost delapidated house. 'you live here?' carter nodded with a sly, evil grin plastered across his face.
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Post by dice on Aug 1, 2005 14:49:31 GMT
They went in, carter went and made them a drink. Katlyn threw her ebony bag on the sofa with her phone falling out. Carter went to make then some pancakes - which they both loved - he poured the oil in the pan and almost turned on the gas when Katlyn realised her drum lesson started in 5 minites. She rushed out saying goodbye to Carter he ran into the living room , leaving his mums lighter next to the pan - he saw katlyns phone on the floor and rushed after her - the gas suddenly came on and as he ran towards her - his house went up in flames....
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Post by ~ab~ on Aug 1, 2005 14:55:15 GMT
the explosion threw carter and katlyn of their feet and through the air. They both landed with a bump but katlyns was worse as she landed face first on the windscreen of carters neighbours car.
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Post by dice on Aug 1, 2005 14:57:37 GMT
it seemed fatal - she was put on a life support machine - cater seemed fine - apart from a few cuts and bruises - he went to her bedside....
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Post by ~ab~ on Aug 1, 2005 14:59:20 GMT
'katlyn, im so sorry!' at that very moment, the life support machine started to squeal and doctors and nurses came rushing into her cubical.
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Post by dice on Aug 1, 2005 15:02:50 GMT
They attemped to resussitate her but carter shut it all out because all he could here was a faint whisper in his head 'time of death' it got louder 'Time of Death, TIME OF DEATH' AAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! TThe doctor came out to speak to carter...
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Post by ~ab~ on Aug 1, 2005 15:06:42 GMT
'im so sorry son' was all the doctor said and then walked down the dark hall. no, No,NO!carter ran in to see katlyn and squeezed her hand so hard he heard the knuckles click.he buried his head in katlyns shoulder and began to scream and cry...
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Post by dice on Aug 1, 2005 15:13:54 GMT
'Get off me freak' - Carter freaked out - a dead girl was talking to him. ' youre ment to be dead' he shivvered 'Oh what a nice way to greet me, the docter said sorry son because ive broken both my legs, my spine and part of my skull and i have damaged my brain - he said...he said.. that...... 'No not again' The life support machine wasnt doing what it did best...
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Post by ~ab~ on Aug 1, 2005 15:17:53 GMT
the end
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Post by dice on Aug 1, 2005 15:40:27 GMT
heya
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Post by dice on Aug 1, 2005 15:40:51 GMT
wanna do a new storie - u start (not vharlie thouigh)
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Post by ~ab~ on Aug 1, 2005 15:41:46 GMT
no,lets write a song in the songs forum
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Post by dice on Aug 1, 2005 15:42:38 GMT
ok
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Post by dice on Aug 2, 2005 19:10:26 GMT
Come on people write you own story like we did ours - One starts then the next carries on....
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Post by PAIGE on Aug 7, 2005 12:14:27 GMT
lardy lardy la! ;D
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